Do you want to work with a famous fashion designer?
The answer to the question is a “yes” to me and most young people who are interested in fashion and design. This is the reason I decide to take part in essay competition.
I have a great interest in fashion industry. If I have the opportunity to work with a famous fashion designer, I can learn not only knowledge but also get some experience out of the textbook.
If I graduate from the secondary school, I will choose to work for the fashion industry. The work experience will therefore be a valuable thing for me. I believe most fashion companies will favorably consider applicants with work experience apart from good academic results. With the opportunity, I can learn how to design the clothes and improve my communication skills.
I know that the salary or pay for fashion designers is not high, especially when they are new. It is also difficult to be a successful designer without hard work and talents. With the opportunity to work, I will follow instructions, and keep my good manner to work with colleagues to serve consumers. I will also be responsible and go to work on time. Having the part time job will also help me become more independent and learn to solve the problems.
If I earn some money, I will buy a computer to help me improve my design skills. I will also save the money for oversea trips during holidays. I also love to visit Milan which is an outstanding city for top trendy fashion productions.
The answer to the question is a “yes” to me and most young people who are interested in fashion and design. This is the reason I decide to take part in essay competition.
I have a great interest in fashion industry. If I have the opportunity to work with a famous fashion designer, I can learn not only knowledge but also get some experience out of the textbook.
If I graduate from the secondary school, I will choose to work for the fashion industry. The work experience will therefore be a valuable thing for me. I believe most fashion companies will favorably consider applicants with work experience apart from good academic results. With the opportunity, I can learn how to design the clothes and improve my communication skills.
I know that the salary or pay for fashion designers is not high, especially when they are new. It is also difficult to be a successful designer without hard work and talents. With the opportunity to work, I will follow instructions, and keep my good manner to work with colleagues to serve consumers. I will also be responsible and go to work on time. Having the part time job will also help me become more independent and learn to solve the problems.
If I earn some money, I will buy a computer to help me improve my design skills. I will also save the money for oversea trips during holidays. I also love to visit Milan which is an outstanding city for top trendy fashion productions.
Finally, I hope that I will win this essay competition that will help to make my dream come truce. I will definitely treasure this experience. (282 words)
- C - 4
Meet the task requirements,
Relevant content,
Ideas well developed,
Good sentences,
Accurate grammar,
Wide range of vocabulary,
Good organization,
Good cohesion,
Good idea link,
Good style,
Well achieved aim,
Sensitive to reader’s needs.
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