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Performance Criteria:
1 Text structure is appropriate to the genre.
Range: orientation,
record of events, reorientation.
2 The text is organized in time /events order.
3 Writing makes correct use of conjunctions.
Range: may
include but is not limited to – contrastive, additive, causal, and temporal.
4 Writing makes correct use of past tense verb forms.
5 Writing makes correct use of a range of vocabulary.
Range: meaning,
grammatical form, word order.
6 Writing makes appropriate use of descriptive phrases.
Range: adjectival,
adverbial.
7 Sentence
structures are complete and convey relevant meaning. Dictionary, list of
topic related vocabularies and terms, Parliament education booklets are
allowed.
Range: sentences
may include but are not limited to – simple, compound, complex.
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Conditions:
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Identify the intended audience
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Identify the purpose of text and pertinent
layout
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Plan the writing task
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Check, edit the complete task
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Two drafts, reflection on the first draft
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Use the stages of a personal recount
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Use the past tense
o
Use the range of tenses necessary for the
recount
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Use time linking words, and conjunctions to
join ideas together
o
Use the vocabulary and terms pertinent for the
task
o
Complete writing within the time frame -- 50
minutes in class
o
Dictionary, list of topic related vocabularies
and terms, Parliament education booklets are allowed.
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6/20/2019
A Recount of the Taronga Zoo Excursion
6/13/2019
Excursion to Taronga Zoo
Date and Time:
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Wednesday, 19 June 2019
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Location(s):
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Taronga Zoo Mosman
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Course Group:
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CSWI III
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Course Unit:
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Purpose of the Excursion:
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To explore wild life in Australia
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Costs:
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$24/person
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What to bring:
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Water bottle, food, snack, warm clothing, sunscreen, first
aid kits
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Important Information:
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The sky safari is closed until further notice but Bus 238
is available and free of cost.
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Additional Information:
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Eg: This can be maps
or brochures of the location that the students are attending.
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Time
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Activity
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8:30 am
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Assemble at Padstow Station
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9.00 – 10.40 am
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Travel from Padstow station to Taronga Zoo Mosman, Train
arrives Padstow at 9:05 am
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11.00 – 11.20 am
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(Koala Encounter, $29.95 for up to 4 people per ticket,
Enquire at Gift Shops)
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12:00 – 12:15 pm
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Chimpanzee Keeper Talk
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12:15 pm – 12:45pm
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Lunch at Taronga Food Market, Microwave available at
Parents Room
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12:45 pm – 1:15 pm
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Elephant Tower Open
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1:15 pm – 1:45 pm
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Tiger Trek
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2:00 pm – 2:20 pm
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Seal Show
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2:40 pm – 2:55 pm
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Penguin Keeper Talk
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3:00 pm
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Leave Taronga Zoo, Bus arrives at 3:10 at Taronga Zoo
Bradleys Head Rd (the Exit)
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4:42 pm
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Arrive at Padstow Station
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Web site at
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6/06/2019
The Grounds of Alexandria
Why do I reckon the Grounds of Alexandria is a good site for class excursion?
This is a beautiful and relaxing site for leisure activity or meet-up with friends.
The class decided to visit Taronga Zoo, as majority of the students found it more educational.
This is a beautiful and relaxing site for leisure activity or meet-up with friends.
The class decided to visit Taronga Zoo, as majority of the students found it more educational.
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